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A Moment Of Love

This is a perfect chance of weakness to finally tell you that this isn't just a crush
It's not all about lust; I've always wanted to confess to you that I care about you so much

I apologize for being hesitant all of the time; it's just very hard to say you're my one true love
I yearned to say it out loud, but the words couldn't escape my mouth, that's what my fear does

I tried to say it to you in every lucid dream, that's how strong these feelings are
And I found myself waking up to tears of joy, because a true sense of hope is in my heart

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I want to win you over
And I will never give up
Because you make the dark brighter
And you're always there no matter what

Every time you smile at me, it makes my day
Every time you laugh with me, it completes my night
Every time you speak to me, my problems fade away
Every time you're with me, it betters this hopeless life

You've done a lot for me that you don't even know about
Like when you told me that I was never alone
You've helped me up all of the times when I was feeling down
And you've always placed me into your arms to hold

You took care of me when no one else would
Embraced me and never dared to let go
You did what any kind person should
When you shared a portion of your hope

You did what no one else could
No one else wanted to
You did everything for the greater good
So I'm alive because of you

You gave me everything
Because you saw I had nothing
You thought I was worth rescuing
Because you wanted me to stop hurting

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I need you to tell me how you really feel, with honesty, you can't leave me here wondering
I need you to be with me, because I cannot handle being away from you, I can't stand waiting

You need to confess everything, because I won't be able to move on if I'm left here not knowing
I'm risking these feelings of mine all for you, because you make it feel like this life is worth living

I hope I mean as much to you as you do to me, so you need to say those words to me, please
Because you don't know that this moment, right here, right now, it -means the world to me-
A moment in time which no words can ever express
I will always remember and cherish your kindness
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Please comment if you liked this poem enough.
I always look forward to hearing from whoever.
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This poem is written for my book project which is titled-
"The Other Side Of The Sky"
In volume six: Eons Of Echoes
A Moment Of Love -
The Words I Really Meant - [link]
The Rainbow Flower - [link]
A Piece Of Freedom - Not Yet Written
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SkrillMau7 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
No matter how many times I read this, it forever pulls on my heart strings. This is just the most perfect poem I've ever read. I love it. :)
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
First, I have to apologize for not replying to your comment. The end of July and the beginning of August was a bit of a busy time. And I know if I leave comments unanswered for a period of time- DA will delete the notification. I just happen to check on this poem for nostalgic reasons and happen to see your unattended comment.

Thank you, you have no idea how much your words mean to me. <3 :D
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musiclovingmisfit Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
this is so sweet, sad, beautiful, and relate-able. :hug:
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
I'm so happy that you've enjoyed this piece. Thank you. <3
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Cinders8328 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, for there being no words to describe this you paint the most beautiful pictures in my heartstrings.
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^_^
Heart strings is my specialty sometimes.
Lol, I'm so happy that you found this to your liking, as it means a lot.
Thank you. <3
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Cinders8328 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It is also mine, feel free to check my page if you get the time. And I wear my heart onmy sleeve and speak the truth!
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I will be sure to check out your gallery when I get some time. :)
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FadeAway1694 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow... Just... wow... Don't even know what to say, but you asked for comments....
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:P That will do just fine.
Thank you so much. :D
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SaiyuriSora01 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Writer
This is exactly how I feel about my best friend.
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awww *hugs*
I also felt this way for my best friend. That's where the inspiration to write this came from. x.x
I hope you liked it.
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SaiyuriSora01 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student Writer
I love it. I wish I could tell him whut this says. :(
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ChipmunkFan19 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is such a sweet poem
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you a ton. I'm very glad you liked it. :)
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ChipmunkFan19 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome and I did like it :D
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doubleFacedHijinx Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I lent out a hand hoping you would take it because I saw,
you were out there with nothing, no one at all.
So I lifted you up and you smiled a ways.
That smile somehow still sticks to me to this day.
The way you lit up when you saw me, whenever you smiled as I cared
made me feel I was needed, and that this was love that I shared.
I hope you could tell me one day, you tell me how I feel.
Because when I open my mouth, the words start to reel...

what happens if the other person was just waiting too?
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
<3
Well, I would think that it was something natural, like, maybe it was meant to be. I think like that every now and then- Trying to believe in fate, and destiny, chance and coincidence. Sometimes, I think 'If it happens, it happens.'

But thank you.
I hope you enjoyed this piece. :)
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doubleFacedHijinx Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really did! I liked the whole wording of the piece and everything, especially the concept becaus I feel it was something I could relate very similarly to.

and sometimes I think like that too, coincidence and fate and everything because quite frankly, being cynical and realistic all the time... It gets sorta tiring and I just have to look up once in a while you know?
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kremkim Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The poem was very nice! So sweet!
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so happy that you enjoyed this, it means a lot to me. Or in this case "it means the world to me" :P
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katoustar Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
nice!
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks ^.^
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la-pomme-de-terre Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
This should be a song; nice work. ^^
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I hear that a lot. And it makes me wonder..... 'what if?' :P
Thank you lol, Oh and I can't stop looking at your avatar XD
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la-pomme-de-terre Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Thank you!
I think there's a larger version of it here on DA; the creator resized it for me at no charge ^^
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Liechi-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing <<3 :3 uve got talent
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awww lol, well that cheered me up. Thank you so much. :)
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Liechi-Chan Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
Welcome! ^^
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ChristinaWhispy Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I wish someone had such a moment of love for me...
Your poem is unique as always...
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww *hugs* xoxoxoxoxoxox
I hoped you enjoyed it. <3
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SaiyuriSora01 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student Writer
This is exactly how I feel right now.
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) This is pretty powerful....x.x
I hope you liked it.
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SaiyuriSora01 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student Writer
I loved it. :D <33
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Kymira12 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the emotion in this poem. You can feel the conflicting emotions and longing within the speakers voice. Are the italics someone else speaking?
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) I'll answer properly in a bit, but the italics are the 'thoughts' of the speaker.
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