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In The Rainfall

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In The Rainfall

Pent-up
Beyond repressed
Dripping with blame

Thoughts erupt
Pain expressed
Bound by hate

I felt...
I felt...
I felt your anger

I held...
I held...
I held my pieces together
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I always wait for the right moment-
To finally break down

I need the pain to flow perfect-
To let it all out

I'm reaching for my tainted core / I won't let you corrupt me anymore
You will not be a part of me / This is not how it's going to be

I always wait for the oncoming storm-
That's the only time

Endure it all until the promised calm-
Just to call it mine
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Set free
Scars erased
I am myself again

Grief released
Clouds dissipate
You're gone with the rain

I am...
I am...
I am my own protection

I can...
I can...
I can rise above the destruction
Wickedness shall not rule me
Guilt will not control my memories
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This poem is written for my project, titled - "The Other Side Of The Sky"
In volume one: Memories Of One

Check out the other poem - In The Snowfall
In The Snowfall

I remember it
As if it was just last night
Our surroundings were lit
Illuminated by the surfaces covered in white

The way you smiled
It gave me comfort inside
And my heart seemed to be veiled
Knowing you have become a part of my life
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Step   by   step
I stopped blinking
As   we   tread
I ceased breathing
Chills   were   sent
Our hands touching
Our   lips   met

Gazing at you is a must
You curiously peered up
As snowflakes danced down towards us
And it dawned on me that I was madly in love

Mesmerizing   my   soul
Spreading a calming warmth
Into   my   core
I held you in my arms
I   felt   whole
Connected our hearts
Alone  

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Check out the template I used for writing, it's from my dark series ---> I'm Almost There
I'm Almost There

Strung out
But sober
Drunk with rage

Broken down
The oppressor
Altered by pain

They say...
They say...
They say the prison is here to save us!

To cage...
To cage...
To cage up the thoughts that are dangerous!
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Weeping for the hollowed
Can't live through tomorrow

My pride I swallowed
And I put on cold smile

My choice is my own
An addiction to being hurt

I want help, but I don't
I wanna change, but I won't

I have too many dark secrets
Flowing in my veins of concrete

This is what they've done to me
The product I like to call "a perfect tragedy."
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Blank stare
Too peaceful
Syncing with blame

A mirror
So pitiful
Soon to

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Short, terse, and almost curt in the way at the beginning, then flowing into an-almost narrative in the middle, In the Rainfall by RainbowizedSky is an extraordinarily unique poem--if it can even be as clearly classified as that.

The first two stanzas are vague in meaning but intense in emotion, conveying images to the reader like brief vivid snapshots. The enjambment causes a sense of abruptness, of loss and missing pieces. The next two stanzas then move into a pattern that can be eventually found in the last two stanzas, which create a sensation of moving forward. The middle, however, is the most intriguing. Reading almost like song lyrics, it flows from one line to the next, luring the reader to consider carefully what the author wants to say.

In the Rainfall is fragmented, disjointed, and may strike some as not at all their taste. It has to be said that perhaps this style of poetry may not appeal to everyone. However, it certainly keeps me reading, and that is, I think, the crux of the matter.