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In The Rainfall
Pent-up
Beyond repressed
Dripping with blame
Thoughts erupt
Pain expressed
Bound by hate
I felt...
I felt...
I felt your anger
I held...
I held...
I held my pieces together
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I always wait for the right moment-
To finally break down
I need the pain to flow perfect-
To let it all out
I'm reaching for my tainted core / I won't let you corrupt me anymore
You will not be a part of me / This is not how it's going to be
I always wait for the oncoming storm-
That's the only time
Endure it all until the promised calm-
Just to call it mine
-
Set free
Scars erased
I am myself again
Grief released
Clouds dissipate
You're gone with the rain
I am...
I am...
I am my own protection
I can...
I can...
I can rise above the destruction
Pent-up
Beyond repressed
Dripping with blame
Thoughts erupt
Pain expressed
Bound by hate
I felt...
I felt...
I felt your anger
I held...
I held...
I held my pieces together
-
I always wait for the right moment-
To finally break down
I need the pain to flow perfect-
To let it all out
I'm reaching for my tainted core / I won't let you corrupt me anymore
You will not be a part of me / This is not how it's going to be
I always wait for the oncoming storm-
That's the only time
Endure it all until the promised calm-
Just to call it mine
-
Set free
Scars erased
I am myself again
Grief released
Clouds dissipate
You're gone with the rain
I am...
I am...
I am my own protection
I can...
I can...
I can rise above the destruction
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I'm Soaring Now
I'm Soaring Now
This is a different level of fear
It's wounding my truth and morality
It's strong enough to bring me here
On the edge of life- peering over to serenity
It's not impossible to grasp
But it's typical to assume
The last breath is the fact
That after death- peace will follow soon
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Countless flashing memories
Crossover swiftly
Ready to be set free
From this skin of...treachery
Fade/Fade/Fade
My scars peel off
Erased from my sight
The remains become soft
So this is what...innocence feels like
Wake/Wake/Wake
Destiny is somehow connected
Fate deems to be natural
The circle of the two is perfected
The beginning to the end is.
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Apart
Apart
I couldn't see the consequences-
As I tried to trust my heart
I just couldn't resist-
The blind love that ceased my wars
Helping me let go of the struggles-
That I foolishly held in my hands
I freed the thoughts that quarreled-
Tears fell in order for me to stand
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Truth can be the worst enemy
Lies can be the strongest ally
Harmony isn't immune to tragedy
Because you made a myth out of your apparent humanity
Mistakes can never be renamed! / Scars can never be erased!
Compassion is used as bait! / Two sides to every face!
A piece of peace is caged! / Watch the bridge burn away!
I'll desecrate the meaning of “passion”
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Dreaming Of Blood
Dreaming Of Blood
I lay solemnly asleep-
Crimson droplets rain down
The heavens are weeping for me-
Releasing all the tears that I won't
I'm cradled by the secrets from within
And the promises of hope that I'm afraid to sing
Along with those memories that bring me to the very brink
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My closed eyes peer up at the sun-stained sky
Painting a portrait of a desired life
Yearning to feel what it's like to live without strife
As my unconscious hand reaches for a trustworthy knife
I open myself up for the first time
And experience my body shiver and cry
A RED RELEASE! / A LIQUID SCREAM!
A CHAIN UNLEASHED! / A NIGHTMARE FREED!
Casting away the
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Wickedness shall not rule me
Guilt will not control my memories
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Guilt will not control my memories
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In volume one: Memories Of One
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In The Snowfall
In The Snowfall
I remember it
As if it was just last night
Our surroundings were lit
Illuminated by the surfaces covered in white
The way you smiled
It gave me comfort inside
And my heart seemed to be veiled
Knowing you have become a part of my life
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Step by step
I stopped blinking
As we tread
I ceased breathing
Chills were sent
Our hands touching
Our lips met
Gazing at you is a must
You curiously peered up
As snowflakes danced down towards us
And it dawned on me that I was madly in love
Mesmerizing my soul
Spreading a calming warmth
Into my core
I held you in my arms
I felt whole
Connected our hearts
Alone
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I'm Almost There
I'm Almost There
Strung out
But sober
Drunk with rage
Broken down
The oppressor
Altered by pain
They say...
They say...
They say the prison is here to save us!
To cage...
To cage...
To cage up the thoughts that are dangerous!
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Weeping for the hollowed
Can't live through tomorrow
My pride I swallowed
And I put on cold smile
My choice is my own
An addiction to being hurt
I want help, but I don't
I wanna change, but I won't
I have too many dark secrets
Flowing in my veins of concrete
This is what they've done to me
The product I like to call "a perfect tragedy."
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Blank stare
Too peaceful
Syncing with blame
A mirror
So pitiful
Soon to
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Short, terse, and almost curt in the way at the beginning, then flowing into an-almost narrative in the middle, In the Rainfall by RainbowizedSky is an extraordinarily unique poem--if it can even be as clearly classified as that.
The first two stanzas are vague in meaning but intense in emotion, conveying images to the reader like brief vivid snapshots. The enjambment causes a sense of abruptness, of loss and missing pieces. The next two stanzas then move into a pattern that can be eventually found in the last two stanzas, which create a sensation of moving forward. The middle, however, is the most intriguing. Reading almost like song lyrics, it flows from one line to the next, luring the reader to consider carefully what the author wants to say.
In the Rainfall is fragmented, disjointed, and may strike some as not at all their taste. It has to be said that perhaps this style of poetry may not appeal to everyone. However, it certainly keeps me reading, and that is, I think, the crux of the matter.