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In The Snowfall

I remember it
As if it was just last night
Our surroundings were lit
Illuminated by the surfaces covered in white

The way you smiled
It gave me comfort inside
And my heart seemed to be veiled
Knowing you have become a part of my life
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Step  by  step
I stopped blinking
As  we  tread
I ceased breathing
Chills  were  sent
Our hands touching
Our  lips  met

Gazing at you is a must
You curiously peered up
As snowflakes danced down towards us
And it dawned on me that I was madly in love

Mesmerizing  my  soul
Spreading a calming warmth
Into  my  core
I held you in my arms
I  felt  whole
Connected our hearts
Alone  no  more
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Within my eyes
I captured those images
To remember for the rest of our lives
Just to relive something so passionate

It was the perfect setting
I was lost in awe
A memory so desiring
This was our walk in the snowfall
I...will always remember this walk...
It was our walk...in the snowfall...
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TwinAgateDragons Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What a lovely piece of literature, I just love it!
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
Thank you so much for your kind words, it means a lot! ^_^
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TheWSK Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
Beautiful poem. Very touching. :)
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^_^
Thank you.
I'm so happy that you found this to your liking. :)
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CoyoteDove Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Quite lovely
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
I'm glad you were able to enjoy it. :D
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
nice love story and a beautiful preview
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. :)
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