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My Unbroken Hero

This grip wasn't mine...
I thought I had let go-

Then our timeline intertwined...
You tried to abolish my sorrow-

My guilt does not outweigh my weaknesses
I don't know what it's like to remain strong
I even ask the undertow for forgiveness
And the stars I don't wish upon

This hope for life-
Was the origin of your smile...

It brings a certain light-
Allowing lost truths to prevail...
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Hail the defenseless
Every tear has a reason
Dreams aren't meaningless
Even souls have seasons

Fear fuels freedom / Combine intention and purpose
All colors brighten / New foundations to harness

For humanity's existence
Kindness has to be selfless
For destiny's persistence
Love needs to be boundless
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This empowerment aligned...
I held on-

This connection defied...
Fears came undone-

My gratitude out-shines my faith
As I walk beyond my past limitations
I get to live for another day
Because of your mortal intervention

You turned the tides-
Lifting me up into tomorrow...

And when I saw your eyes-
I knew you were my unbroken hero...
Hands held high
Hopes held tight
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Stock image = fav.me/dtzxqc
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This poem is written for my project which is titled-
"The Other Side Of The Sky"
In volume eight: Letting Go
My Unbroken Hero -
Our Numb Tears - fav.me/d4lr9mf
A Voice In The Wind - fav.me/d5cl7tc
Time Is The Cure - fav.me/d5vr4i9
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JenniferEasley Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Hi, i just wanted to say i thought your poem was beautiful, and i'm wondering if you would be interested in submitting it to a magazine i'm involved with. Our theme this month is "Heroes", and this could fit in well as we are looking for any and all interpretations of that theme. So if you'd be willing to submit this or any other work you've done, then it'd be great if you could check out my journal for more info, and for the email address for literature submissions :) [link]

Thank you!
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ExaltedPoet Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:typerhappy:
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seaturtle1148 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
This is wonderful! I love it. It has a very powerful feel to it, very nice. :)
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^_^
Thank you for your kind comment. I'm so happy that this has done so well. And that it connected with people in a way I anticipated. Thanks again. <3
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choco-latte-squirrel Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is really great, the ending was my favorite. :heart:
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
I kept the ending the same as in the first version. I really love the ending too. I'm glad it has that effect on others than myself. Thank you. <3
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choco-latte-squirrel Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You are so very welcome. :)
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sumarlegur Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
As a poem, this is awful. And fix the I can feel the suffering that your hiding / so no one will know that your badly hurt, where it's you're, and never your. Bad grammar in literature makes me sad.
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TruthsImmuneToTime Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
homosexuality is a sin. jesus said so himself
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FelixErikson Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
He sure did not... Frankly, even if they exist or not, I don't think they give a flying fuck about who's fucking who. Now go bother someone else.
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