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The Shades Of My Eyes

Emerald:
Treading along a path of healing
Within an aura of rejuvenation

Restore the strongest force of life
Renew these weakening limits of mine

Devotion has no means to an end
There is only hope and strength to be lent

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Azure:
Just like the void called the sky
Even the clouds don't hinder sight

A storm could be brewing
And lightning could be striking

But there is no fear dwelling
Only a calm, tranquil feeling

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Violet:
A rarity itself
An enigma that stands out

A peace that transcends
An energy that ascends

A strong person who is still only human
An outcome of living within the moment

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Gold:
Like a stunning sunrise
Shunning out an ominous evening night

Piercing through that unending blanket of darkness
To see the light of day again, it tells me that I've made it

The sun rays hit and land
And starts to melt the doubt from my hands

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Ashen:
The will to endure
The wisdom to acquire

There are no words that speak truly
Enough to express the feeling of serenity

A soul as tough as stone
Ashes to ashes, flesh to bone

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Obsidian:
Shadows inhabit reality
The darkness exists naturally

Cover up the world
Let it rest up for tomorrow

But I can still see
Within the veil that shrouds me
No room for exile
No despair to desire
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This poem is written for my project, titled-
"The Other Side Of The Sky"
In volume seven: Shooting Stars
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bestunearthywolfever Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very beautiful.....good job :)
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for your kind words, it means a lot when someone says that! :D <3
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bestunearthywolfever Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
np :D you deserve the love.
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menotmyselfori Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
*claps*
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*bows*
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menotmyselfori Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
*gives standing ovation*
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is absolutely stunning. Your way with words and imagery is just fantastic. I wish I had the right words to explain my opinion on this piece.
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awww,well thank you. I'm so happy that you felt that way. And you don't have to say anything if you don't want to. I'm just glad people thought it was worthy. That's enough for me as is. :)
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Hazelmallorn Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student Writer
Amazing! Beautiful :)
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:iconrecoloringlife:
RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. It means a lot. <3
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:iconhazelmallorn:
Hazelmallorn Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome :)
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SusanneDorethea Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so beautiful
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)
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rajjib Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice work.
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:iconrecoloringlife:
RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconrajjib:
rajjib Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome
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RomanceFreak Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is absolutely stunning!! Such pure poetry!
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awww, you're too kind. Thank you for your kind words. <3
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RomanceFreak Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're very welcome. :) :heart:
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Cale-Baird Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student Filmographer
This is familiar. but I can't tell where from. Hmm...

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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmmmmmmm
x.x?
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darkreester Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Absolutely fabulous.

I LOVED this <3
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you a ton. I'm so happy that you were able to enjoy this as much as I have. :D <3
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MarianaErwin555 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Truly a beautiful poem. :D
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, that means a lot when you say it like that! :D
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MarianaErwin555 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Yes it does. It seems the emotion is about painful memories. Beautiful sad poem, I hope you create more! :D
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Gamingdreamer Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your poem reminded me of why I'm so diligent with colors, especially with choosing the eye color for a new character.
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, well I hope you liked it. :D
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Gamingdreamer Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, of course!
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JrOeKnEeRe Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Reminds me of my own eyes
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, that's cool! :P
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MulderYuffieOCT Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
So beautiful <3
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :D <3
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M-Pounds Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very pretty!
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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MrJuniorer Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I freakin' love this!!!
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:iconrecoloringlife:
RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heheh, thank you.
I <3 your avatar by the way, Dean! :D
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MrJuniorer Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem and thanks, Dean's awesome!!
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chocoleesy Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Woah!! I LURVE this! <3 STELLAR!!!
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:iconrecoloringlife:
RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, well thank you so much. I'm so glad that you liked this. :D
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AnglAlejandro Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Fantastic!!!
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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Andrea-Perry Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think its cool how you made the poem into the sequences of the time of day, very creative! :)
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, omg, I didn't notice that until you pointed it out.....I mean....that was sooooo my intention...I've been planning it for years!

I was testing you, and you passed.

;) Thank you. <3 I'm happy that you liked it.
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CatchingFear Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student General Artist
I like this! It's enjoyable to read, and full of imagination ^^
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RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm happy that you thought so. Thank you, it means a lot! :D
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Writer
Great work on this! Very neat imagery!
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:iconrecoloringlife:
RecoloringLife Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Writer
Welcome!
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